Writing Task Definition Paragraph

How to start to write a definision Paragraph?

STEP 1. Brainstorming Using Questioning

1.      What is Kelakai Chips?

2.      How familiar of Kalakai chips for people in Central Kalimantan?

3.      Write definition in your words for Kalakai chips ( Using Adjective Clause)

4.      Why do you think Kalakai chips is so popular?

5.      What benefits kelakai?

       STEP 2. Make an Outline of your definition paragraph you are going to write

·            Kelakai

·            Kelakai Chips

·            Deliciacy

·            Tasty

·            Dayak

STEP 3. Write First draft of your definition paragraph based on your outline (Write strange words under the paragraph)

Kelakai : vegetbles type of nails fern that grow in peat land in Cental                                              Kalimantan

Kelakai Chips : Kelakai young in the dip into the batter of flour and spices and fried

Delicacy : a special food or snack.

Tasty : Delicious, Having a good or special tasty.

Dayak : Dayak is one of the tribles in central kalimantan.

Kelakai Chips

         One Snack a very popular in central kalimantan is Kelakai Chips. Snack Kelakai Chips is typical dayak, first Kelakai many benefits and in trust by the dayak community as a blood booster drug, youthful drug, to treat aneamia, fever reliever, increase stamina and treat skin disease, Second  Kelakai chips famous

because of the delicacy and crispness, finally, Kelakai chips can made snacks passionate, healthy and tasty at the time to relax with your beloved family and friend. In conclusion Kelakai chips are found in central kalimantan and become one souvenir by typical central kalimantan.

Kelakai : vegetbles type of nails fern that grow in peat land in Cental                                             Kalimantan

Kelakai Chips : Kelakai young in the dip into the batter of flour and spices and fried

Delicacy : a special food or snack.

Tasty : Delicious, Having a good or special tasty.

Dayak : Dayak is one of the tribles in central kalimantan.

Revised version

PALANGKARAYA CITY 

One of the place to visit in Central Kalimantan is Palangkaraya City. It has some of the interesting place, food, culture and beautiful city. First, Nyaru Menteng, in there we can enjoy the view with a calm. Second, Palangkaraya has monument Tugu Soekarno, which is there one of the place to business such as palm-coconut. Third, Palangkaraya has Dayak culture, such as Dayak dance, example Manasai dance, Giring-Giring, and and the others. Fourth, Palangkaraya has any special food such as Umbut Juhu Kalakai, Saluang fish, and the others. Five, In Palangkaraya has many famous hotel, such as Danum Hotel, Aquarius Boutique Hotel, Global Hotel, and the others. Finally Palangkaraya has Kahayan Bridge, from The kahayan Bridge we can enjoy the view and the beauty of city at Kahayan River . In concluding, Palangkaraya is interesting place to visit because there is still hidden beauty that still unknown yet by local and outside people in the world.

EFL Writing II Class

Red : Topic Sentence

Blue : Concluding Sentence

PALANGKARAYA CITY

            One of the place to visit in Central Kalimantan is Palangkaraya City. It has some of the interesting place and beautiful city. There are many forest such as Nyaru Menteng and and the others. in Palangakaraya has monument Tugu Soekarno  which is there one of the place to business such as palm-coconut, Palangkaraya has Dayak culture, such as Dayak dance, example Manasai dance, Giring-Giring, and and the others. in Palangkaraya any special food such as Umbut Juhu Kalakai, Saluang fish, and the others. In Palangkaraya has many famous hotel, such as Danum Hotel, Aquarius Boutique Hotel, Global Hotel, and the others. Finally Palangkaraya has Kahayan Bridge. Palangkara is interesting place to visit because there is still hidden beauty that still unknown yet by local and outside people in the world.